Here are some of my Year 1 students who are currently working on descriptive feedback with me.  I try to give them descriptive feedback each day and have them tell me why I have either circled a word or underlined a letter or given ticks.  Here are some of their pieces of writing.IMG_0036 IMG_0037 IMG_0038 IMG_0039 IMG_0040 IMG_0041 IMG_0042 IMG_0043 IMG_0044